Analysis of just a kid

fredrick

                cold air on your skin
                  i can fly on a bin  
                  i fly on a line
                  i can thro a dime
                 now i pack up for sunchine

Scheme AABCA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (60%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Lanturne  (20%)
Metre 11111 111101 11101 11101 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 192
Words 29
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted by FredrickK7762 on April 13, 2023

Modified on April 13, 2023

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