Analysis of Atleast Not Today
Another argument another hurt soul
We disagree over the phone
Because neither of us have control
I end my night crying
By friday though the both of us are whining
My mind is all over the place
But still i sit with a straight face
My fist could hit my headboard all day
But still my world would shake
I sit in a room with white walls
Thinking what i did so wrong
My heart sunk into the deep blue ocean
Why didn't you at least call
Look at me the same
I'd hate to be the blame
I sit beneath these black & glittery sheets
Tapping a black gel pen against my ripped up jeans
Finally as the tip of the pen gently touches the paper
All i can see are those brown eyes & perfectly clear lies
I shiver in this dark lonely skin of mine
Thinking of how badly i messed up this time
So much guilt im just ashamed a
How could i do this knowing im who to blame
You give me a look
While i have nothing more to say but
“I didn't do it”
At Least not today
Made my M.N.P
Scheme | AXABB CC DX XX XX EE XX XX XX XEXXXD X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01010001011 10011001 011011101 111110 11010111110 11111001 11111011 11111111 111111 11001111 1011111 1110101110 1101111 11101 111101 1101111001 100111011111 1001011011010010 1111111110011 11001110111 10111011111 11111010 11111101111 11101 111101111 11011 11101 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 991 |
Words | 227 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 6, 1 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 68 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
About this poem
it's about what I went through, and thought about after my first long relationship ended
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