Analysis of Time Portal--Wormhole Blues

Leonard Wilson 1948 (Washington state)



*Time Portal-Wormhole Blues*

(Boogie Woogie beat)

***
I got those

time portal...
Wormhole Blues
My memories always
Return to you

Time portal
Wormhole Blues
You're all see, girl
You know it is true!

(Bridge,)
 *Escape velocity's
Beyond my reach
It's pullin' stronger, now
You're all i see!*

I'm spinnin' faster, now
I'm goin' down!
You're  disaster, flyin'
 faster than sound!

I can't avoid it
You're my only truth!
Your gravity will pull me
back to you!

Escape velocity 's
beyond my reach
I'm gettin' lost in you
I'm feelin' weak!

Time Portal
Wormhole Blues

I hope you're worth it
I'm in love with you!

I hope you're worth it
I'm in love with you!


Scheme a x x BAxc BAxc xaDef exex gxfc xDcx BA GC GC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (37%)
Metre 11011 10101 1 111 110 11 11001 0111 110 11 1111 11111 1 011 0111 110101 1111 11101 111 10101 1011 11011 11101 1100111 111 0101001 0111 11101 111 110 11 11111 10111 11111 10111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 683
Words 144
Sentences 10
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

Boogie Time!

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Written on April 07, 2023

Submitted by lenadrwilson on April 07, 2023

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Leonard Wilson

I used to write songs for a rock band in California. I write poems, lyrics, opinion And noir crime stories set in the 40s, 30s and 20s. more…

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