Analysis of You Don’t Deserve My Tears



You don't deserve my tears,
They are golden, precious.
They should only be shed in the most meaningful moments.
They are not to be taken for granted,
Nor should they be wasted on you,
Who can’t fathom the magnitude of my emotions,
And the depth of my love.
I deserve all the blessings of joy
Not the pains you bring upon me
My self  needs my compassion
Not your dishonest ways.
You don't deserve my heart,
You only showered it with lies.
I deserve honesty and loyalty,
Not manipulated speech and lyrics.
You don't deserve my tears,
I'll not shed them over you.
My heart no longer hears,
What my soul once knew.
No longer am I bound,
In the ties of love we shared.
So I leave no regrets,
Nor any debt declared.
My dreams no longer burn,
Lingering thoughts of you.
The future I now discern,
No longer in pain, I'm through.
So I'll move with the wind,
No more tears you'll see.
Your heart I can't mend,
Nor yours, for me.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110111 111010 11101100110010 1111110110 11111011 111001011010 001111 101101011 10111011 1111010 110101 110111 11010111 1011000100 101001010 110111 1111101 111101 11111 110111 0011111 111101 110101 111101 100111 0101101 1100111 111101 11111 11111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 928
Words 202
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 31
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 704
Words per stanza (avg) 175
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Written on April 05, 2023

Submitted by Wildflower888 on April 05, 2023

Modified by Wildflower888 on October 16, 2023

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