Analysis of Don't let me perish

Kevin Yeits 1985 (Almaty)



Don't punish me for every moment
For every day that I'm alive
Whole my life's like filthy comment -
I'm a prisoner in social gap.

Don't kill me for my single feelings,
For my obsession be in love.
This freaky world my handmade Kingdom
Sometimes so bright, sometimes so tough.

I don't return, you can remember
And you can see my tears in sky,
My last explosion as was never,
My magic death and witchcraft cry.


Scheme XXXX XXXX ABAB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1101110010 110011101 11111010 101000101 111111010 11010101 110111110 01110111 110111010 01111101 110101110 1101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 410
Words 84
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on October 25, 2022

Submitted by yessenov_k on March 22, 2023

Modified by yessenov_k on March 22, 2023

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