Analysis of "Memories of you"



"Memories of you"

That smile so white that it lights up so bright...

when Im looking at you my eyes see the wonders of life through you.
Sometimes I just gaze at your soul,to me your a beautiful masterpiece that God made, your art in God's eyes and in mine too.

I'm sure others see the same...

I've been quiet since I last saw you, the light in you gave me hope to cope.
It's hard since you left sometimes I think of death.
 I cope by looking back at the  memories the care in your eyes on that pretty face.

Your eyes have a spark when  I'm in my darkest feels...

Your laughter,that smile and your hidden dimple imbedded in mind all the time.

Like I said before in other poems

The memories of you is like I been in those moments before,it's like something is keeping a hold,a force thats strong, could we belong ?

I never had that kind of feels until I laid eyes on you,may we share because I care.

I would like to make more memories of you.

You have no clue I will walk  miles  to cure my soul ,girl you give my heart energy...

Don't think of this poem as a love poem, think of it as a personal letter addressed to you, only you.
I write from my heart,
girl let me make more memories of you.
just you and me this time with means
i want to beam...
-Lenamarie clark ©️


Scheme A X AA X XXX X X X X X A X AXAXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 1111111111 1110111110101111 0111111111010010111110110011 1110101 111011111010111111 11111011111 111101101000101111101 111011101101 11101101001001101 1110101010 0100111111011011101100101111101 110111110111111110111 11111110011 11111111111111111100 1111101011011110100100111101 11111 1111110011 11011111 1111 11
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,283
Words 285
Sentences 17
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 1, 3, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 6
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I wrote this thinking of my Earth angel who saved me and now I miss the memories of her.

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Written on March 15, 2023

Submitted by PoetFeather on March 15, 2023

Modified on March 30, 2023

1:27 min read
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Lenamarie Clark

My name Is Lenamarie Clark, From Arizona. I been writing poetry since age 11,I have well over 150 poems, i write just about daily. Poetry is my story, keeps me going in life! I dont know where I would be if poetry didn't exist. I believe that some where someone needs someone's inspiration... -Lenamarie Clark- more…

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