Analysis of addicted bum
crucify my stance
a prophet of fools
watch me preserve it
and I forgive you too
I get choked up
when I let myself go too far
but I don’t run.
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feelings feed awareness,
whatever it is
I disengage from everything but you
show me big guns, and bigger consequences
play that symphony, a rerun,
preach me through a huge gap in time
feed me your execution wishes
stuff me a memorable carcass.
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unlock your doors
as I raid you
I realize it gives me
a sense of essence
to some degree
I’m the only one drowning in me.
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so listen to me
so much becomes the truth
at the end
dying with you truly lasts forever
watch me love you still
still in a ceremony as a captive
watch me watch you crucify me
I don’t run
I’m into you
I’m an addicted bum
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Scheme | ABCDEFG HIDJGKIH LDMNMM MOPQRSMGDT |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (37%) |
Metre | 1011 01011 11011 010111 1111 1111111 1111 1 101010 1011 100111011 1111010100 11100011 11101101 11101010 110100010 1 0111 1111 110111 01110 1101 101011001 1 11011 110101 101 1011101010 11111 1001001010 1111101 111 1011 110101 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 833 |
Words | 153 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 35 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 570 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 148 |
About this poem
I don't care what happens
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Written on February 16, 2023
Submitted by azdi404 on March 14, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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