Analysis of Lamenting



These people are foolish,
For they know not the Lord;
So stupid and mulish,
His Word has been ignored.

With no understanding,
But wise doing evil;
Darkness is commanding,
The work of the devil.

God looked upon the earth,
Was without form and void;
To Heaven giving birth,
That light would be employed.

He beheld the mountains,
That had grown from the hills;
Established the fountains,
To lakes where water fills.

Behold, there was no man,
Birds of the air had fled;
People foiled His plan,
All the creatures were dead.

Fruitful lands were barren,
Cities lay in ruin;
Because the Lord they shun,
Caused by immoral sin.

They followed the wrong path,
And totally ignored;
The fierce anger and wrath,
In the sight of the Lord.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ KKKX LBLB X
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 111101 11001 111101 11010 111010 101010 011010 110101 101101 110101 111101 11010 111101 010010 111101 011111 110111 10111 101001 101010 101010 010111 110101 110011 010001 011001 001101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 769
Words 167
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Without Form and Void Jeremiah 4:22-26

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Written on March 10, 2023

Submitted by sir_ricky on March 09, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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