Analysis of Turn blind to see Light



Without my sun I'm flying in the sky searching for you
To light it for me
to show me the way
To be with me in my own isolation
Iwas waiting... I'm waiting and iwill be waiting for you even if it takes my sight...
Iwas scared... I'm scared and iwill be scared unless you come to light my path, to be my sun,my only light and my source of living... please come back and let us be blind to see our true selves to see our true souls ... but  I'm tired... my wings are cut down... icant reach u anymore...I'm falling falling......... and how I dare to fly without my sun....without you....


Scheme ABCDEA
Poetic Form
Metre 01111100011011 11111 11101 1111011010 11011001110111011111 11110111011111111111101011110111011111110111110111110111111111101001111101111
Characters 587
Words 120
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 70
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 422
Words per stanza (avg) 115

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What i'have felt in that right moment i'wrote it down

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Written on March 21, 2020

Submitted by Www.Kimhadil5250 on February 15, 2023

Modified on March 29, 2023

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