Analysis of Dead Height Trods.



Cold at the beginning of winter,
Already knew I would suffer,
All I could make,
Was a shake.

Coal system train,
Causing me grit comfort,
But still cause me pain.

Covered with a long cloth,
My chest under a cot,
My head in vibrations,
My body in hard sensations.

Was it like that?
Like a canon?
Like a grenade?
Like a gun?
This banging in my head.

Comparison of earthquake cannot be to my body,
Shaking on my bed,
Hoped in God,
My faith was in my hearth located.

Red fluids passed with a pipe,
I am to weep,
Never!!!
This faith is not a spoiler.

The lab coated already gave up,
Wishing me dead up,
I never gave up,
Because giving up,
Shall never treat me up.

Now the hour has come,
My eyes closed gently,
My veins were silent,
I already know it's God's plan.

I have been covered,
They considered me dead,
They pack me at the end.

I sailed on the boat of a ghost,
But I heard a voice,
A voice called me back,
Then I ran to my body.

Yes!!!
I opened my eyes to light,
Thanks to the Faith,
Thanks to God,
The Omega wanted me back.


Scheme AABB CXC XXDD XEXEF GFHX XXAA IIIII XGXX XFX XXJG XXXHJ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (42%)
Metre 110010110 01011110 1111 101 1101 101110 11111 101011 111001 110010 11001010 1111 1010 1001 101 110011 0100111011110 10111 101 11101110 1101101 1111 10 1111010 011001011 10111 11011 01101 110111 101011 11110 11010 10101111 11110 101011 111101 11101101 11101 01111 1111110 1 1101111 1101 111 00101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,036
Words 258
Sentences 17
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 5, 4, 4, 5, 4, 3, 4, 5
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

The power of faith in God is the central theme. With faith, everything can be restored.

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Written on February 28, 2023

Submitted by Oguntuasevictor60 on February 28, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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