Analysis of .NOT A CASTLE GIRL.

Mahvish naaz 2003 (Hyderabad)



I a little girl,

favourite of everyone,

From a small town,

With no crown,

A town with silent waves,

And ocean with no hurdels,

A dream of a dream,

A dream with pure heart,

Heart with flowers,

My one day was equal to your whole life,

Innocence was my power,

Frightened with every drop of rain,

Now, i came out of the castle,

For dreams and life,

With no fear, of anything

I groomed myself, 

with every beat of my heart,

Now iam tired of wishes and luck,

The four walls of the castle, 

taught me Hopes are like poison,

in diamond rings,

Life is a dream with open wings,

In castles there is dark,

with fake lifes,

There is devil behind every beautiful life,

Now iam done with this life,

And fear of death,

Now i want to walk alone on this road,

With sword of innocence, and  pure heart,

I came out of my castle ,

To bow my sky,

To shine in sky,

Iam walking on roads with thrones and fire,

To change my life, for a chance of dreams,

To prove this world iam not just a castle girl...


Scheme A B C C D D X E X F G X H F X X E X H B I I X X F F X X E H J J G X A
Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 10101 1110 1011 111 011101 010111 01101 01111 1110 1111101111 1001110 101100111 11111010 1101 111110 111 11001111 111011001 0111010 1111110 0101 11011101 010111 111 1110011001001 111111 0111 1111101111 111100011 1111110 1111 1101 1101111010 111110111 11111110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,016
Words 258
Sentences 1
Stanzas 35
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 21
Words per stanza (avg) 5

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It's about a little girl from a small town to the castle crown

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Written on February 15, 2023

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Modified on May 03, 2023

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