Analysis of War



Sadness fills my weary eyes my tears r trapped I cannot cry my hearts been lost up in the clouds when it was storming out rage became the way of life piercing many w gun or knife anger crashed upon all innocence lost we can’t recall when will we reach the finish line cause hope is running out of time from it never ends god tell us how to make amends a mothers fears she’s lost her life her daughter there may not survive she sticks a needle in her arms not realizing all the harm the heroin flows deep within and then she lives a life of sin from here to there it never ends god tell us how to make amends a man who’s trapped filled with much pain now traumatized no longer sain from here to there it never ends god tell me how to make amends


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111011111110111111001111101101011110101001111010111001111111101011111011111101111111010101110101011101110100011100101010011010111011111111101111111010111111111011011111110111111101
Characters 750
Words 150
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 592
Words per line (avg) 150
Letters per stanza (avg) 592
Words per stanza (avg) 150

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I try to write about different things all the time this one is a lil old but it’s mine

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Written on August 24, 2007

Submitted by Belindadevine9 on February 18, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Belinda devine

I’ve written poetry ever since I was a child and have eight wonderful children of my own a few of which are also poetry writers and artists. more…

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