Analysis of Drums



How many elegies are enough—
the tone, the muffled drums,
the heart pressed to dirt.

The leaves, having ridden
the grass so long lies mulched
and mounded over the beds.

The guy down the block
who hasn’t spoken to
me in more than twenty years, said

his brother has pancreatic cancer
tumors everywhere. Holding out
his hand he said Parkinson’s.

The tumors start when it gets cold
Gale warnings and snow.
He stands at his mailbox

in shorts and a t-shirt, socks,
slippers. He’d watched the
hearse

carry off the old man across the street.
He guesses he’ll be next.


Scheme XAX XXX XXX XXA XXB BXX XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1101101 010101 01111 011010 011111 011001 01101 11101 10111011 110101010 1010101 11111 01011111 11001 11111 0100111 10110 1 1010110101 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 583
Words 116
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

It is about passing over after our time in this world has expired.

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Written on February 16, 2023

Submitted on February 16, 2023

Modified on April 30, 2023

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John Kucera

John Kucera was educated at Carlow University in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, where he majored in English Literature and Creative Writing. His work has appeared in Philadelphia Stories and in New Reader Magazine. He currently lives in Arizona, where he writes and teaches. more…

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