Analysis of Building with its Face Blown Off (by billy collins)



How suddenly the private
is revealed in a bombed-out city,
how the blue and white striped wallpaper

of a second-storey bedroom is now
exposed to the lightly falling snow
as if the room had answered the explosion

wearing only its striped pyjamas.
Some neighbours and soldiers
poke around in the rubble below

and stare up at the hanging staircase,
the portrait of a grandfather,
a door dangling from a single hinge.

And the bathroom looks almost embarrassed
by its uncovered ochre walls,
the twisted mess of its plumbing,

the sink sinking to its knees,
the ripped shower curtain,
the torn goldfish trailing bubbles.

It’s like a dollhouse view
as if a child on its knees could reach in
and pick up the bureau, straighten a picture.

Or it might be a room on a stage
in a play with no characters,
no dialogue or audience,

no beginning, middle and end –
just the broken furniture in the street,
a shoe among the cinder blocks,

a light snow still falling
on a distant steeple, and people
crossing a bridge that still stands.

And beyond that – crows in a tree,
the statue of a leader on a horse,
and clouds that look like smoke,

and even farther on, in another country
on a blanket under a shade tree,
a man pouring wine into two glasses

and a woman sliding out
the wooden pegs of a wicker hamper
filled with bread, cheese and several kinds of olives.


Scheme XAB XCD EEC EBX XEF EDE XXB XEE XXE FXE AEX AAE XBE
Poetic Form
Metre 1100010 101001110 10101110 101010111 011010101 11011100010 1010111 11010 101001001 01110101 0101010 0110010101 00111010 11010101 01011110 0110111 011010 0111010 11011 1101111110 01101010010 111101101 00111100 1101100 10101001 1010100001 01010101 011110 101010010 1001111 00111001 011010101 011111 010101001010 101010011 0110101110 0010101 0101101010 11110101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,361
Words 277
Sentences 6
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

Want to build up for this forum a number of pieces by Billy Collins. Not my poem here.

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Written on April 27, 2009

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 13, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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