Analysis of Stone Angel

Ax.barajas 1980 (Illinois)



Porcelain skin, a faded smile; not
 a flinch. All crumbled beneath the
 earth.
 Wings of glory a torn rob gripping
 that mighty sword. A sense of
 peace as you gaze upon her eyes.

Never losing focus sun's rays on
 her shoulder. A bit of warmth a
 bit of security. Dust away your
 worries. Bow down to her presence
 and leave them at her feet.

So many centuries hidden from
 human eyes always watchful not a
 single crack.
 In this time of chaos she comes out
 like a mighty hurricane to disrupt
 man-kinds destruction.

A guardian to many.
 An imminent light.
 A beacon of hope for lost souls.
 Through the hands of time angel's
 stare. Coming forth to save those
 worthy of His glory.

To restore peace. Relieve pain and
replace that which has been lost.
Regain in His trust and He will bring  balance, beauty and peace.
For those who have been shed in
darkness He will bring light.

For those struggling and corrupted
from today's society He will bring
warmth from the bitten frost bite.
Open your eyes. Look all that
surrounds you. Gaze upon the
stars full of majesty.

We are not alone. His warriors are
coming forth through stone and
earth, river or plain. They are here
rising from the ashes to fight for
those who seek salvation and
keep the demons at bay.


Scheme XAXBXC XADXX XAXXXX EFXCXE GXXXF XBFXAE XGXDGX
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 100101011 01110010 1 111001110 1101011 11110101 101010111 01001110 1101001011 10111010 011101 110100101 10111010 101 011110111 101010101 11010 0100110 11001 01011111 101111 1101111 101110 10110110 111111 010110111101001 1111110 101111 111000010 1010100111 1101011 1011111 0111010 111100 1110111001 101110 11011111 101010111 1110100 101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,304
Words 261
Sentences 28
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 6, 6, 5, 6, 6
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

I wrote this poem inspired by an actual event that took place. Letting us know. "This world does not exist without miracles." Enjoy and be blessed

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Written on February 10, 2023

Submitted by axbarajas0419 on February 11, 2023

Modified by axbarajas0419 on February 11, 2023

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