Analysis of you’re missing
for every minute I squandered
time burning away
looking down at my phone
instead of looking up
at you
for all the stop and stares
that I wasted
on everything and everyone
but you
you deserved my full stop
you deserved my attention
you were my mother bird
and I was your little wing
you carried me underneath
your heart long ago
I remember the rhythm,
like a pop song
when I was yours
and you were mine
six months ago
you ran out of heartbeats
a deafening silence
I look up from my phone,
but now you’re missing
my dear robin
now you have my full stop
now you have my attention
but it’s too late -
all these days have burned away
and now you’re gone
my missing pop song; my mom
I press on, heart to bits
alone with a damn phone
humming to the beat of your drum
I don’t want to live in a world
where you do not exist
but for you, mom,
hand on heart,
I’ll try.
Scheme | ABCXDXXED FEAGXHIXXX HXXCG EFEXBXJ XCI XXJXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110010110 11001 101111 011101 11 110101 1110 110010 11 101111 1011010 101101 0111101 110101 11101 1010010 1011 1111 0101 1101 11111 010010 111111 11110 1110 111111 1111010 1111 1111101 0111 1101111 111111 011011 10101111 11111001 111101 1111 111 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 883 |
Words | 191 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 10, 5, 7, 3, 5 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
About this poem
this is a poem that cradles the grief I carry after the death of my mother
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Written on January 03, 2023
Submitted by bmassoglia on January 05, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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