Analysis of Street Children



Children on streets,
Hot Footpath seat,
We dislike to meet,
When near our car, they reach,
Knocking their hands,we hit,
                  Children on streets...........l

Untidy hair long,
Wear clothes torn,
No cardigan to warm,
We never know, when they born,
Inocent lives,all things wrong,
                     Children on streets..........l

Not having treats,
And any sweets,
Only stale food to eat,
Curious eyes, no one  talk neat,
                        Children on streets...........l

Homes on road,
No life turning mode,
Working with heavy load,
Without help,we only mercy showed,
                        Children on streets................l

No-one change fate,
People only hate,
When see child abuse call 1098,
        Upcoming youth,
Plz open your mind gate,
Do something, Not to be late,
                            Children on streets............l

Written by -viiru


Scheme abbxxC dexedC aabbC ffffC ggcxggC x
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1011 111 10111 1110111 10111 1011 01011 111 110011 1101111 1111 1011 1101 0101 101111 10011111 1011 111 11101 101101 01110101 1011 1111 10101 111011 101 110111 1101111 1011 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 883
Words 153
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 5, 5, 7, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

When I was seeing street children were begging on streets, people rushed in hurry giving them coins and passed away. So I wrote this for the children who I saw in my city

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Submitted by shantanushinde365 on January 22, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Viraj Shinde

Viraj Sandip Shinde, Indian child poet, Grade 4th , Age- 10 year old Date of birth -8/9/2012 Male, Country -Indian Special abled child (spin operated) Orchid International School Nagpur 440010 Maharashtra state , India more…

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