Analysis of Stages



He sat all dressed in black
She was in the casket
The casket was open
But it wasn't her

She wasn't pale
She had a certain shine to her
She was always
so upbeat
So energetic
She was
Alive
That's how he knew the woman
In that casket
Was not
Her

He walked home
He sat in his dark room
Her portrait on the wall
He stood up
He grabbed her portrait
He threw it
He screamed
He wept
He threw stuff
He broke stuff

He sat next to her grave
Crying
Begging
For her to return
He yelled at her
He tried to reason with her
Yet she wouldn't return

He lies in his bed
For days at a time
Days turned into months
The darkness has consumed him
His room a mess
Objects broken on the floor
Glass everywhere
Why did she leave him

He was shattered into pieces
He was the glass jars
He was the shattered glass
On the floor

She won’t come back
He can’t make her come back

He was the glass
He picked the glass
Up off the floor
He formed it and molded it
Into a new man
He cleaned up the pieces
She left behind

He Sailed away onto distant shores
He was the water in the ocean
He was the light of the sun
He was the flowers blooming in spring
She was gone
He had returned


Scheme ABCD XDXXXXXCBXD XXXXBEXXFF XGGHDDH XXXIXJXI KXLJ AA LLJEXKX XCCGXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 110010 010110 11100 1101 11010110 111 11 1010 11 01 1111010 0110 11 0 111 110111 010101 111 11010 111 11 11 111 111 111101 10 10 10101 1110 1111010 111001 11011 11101 11011 0101011 1101 1010101 110 11111 11100110 11011 110101 101 1111 111011 1101 1101 1101 1110101 01011 111010 1101 110110101 110100010 1101101 110101001 111 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,160
Words 251
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 11, 10, 7, 8, 4, 2, 7, 6
Lines Amount 59
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This poem follows a man throughout months after his wife dies, the poem shows him going through the stages of grief. At the end of the poem he finally comes to terms that his wife is gone, The end of the poem is up to the reader's interpretation, in the end, he "sails away to distant shore" it's up to the reader whether he died or went on with life without her.

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Written on January 05, 2023

Submitted by grogan.mary2007 on January 10, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Mary L Grogan

I am a 15-year-old poet from Iowa after I graduate high school I will be attending 2 years of community college and then going to university to get my bachelors in social work. Most of my poetry is written about mental health, grieving, and other worldly issues. more…

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