Analysis of Make me see



I’m screaming crying, make me see
It’s hard here wanting, make me believe
I’m living for you but I still need
You to love me, set me free
And make me believe

All this faith is so hard on me
Everyone saying you just have see
All the love he’s given me
But in my life it’s so hard to see
And hard to believe
It’s not for me

Friends always on the leave
No one there to talk to me
All the time I look I see
People who take advantage of me
And then the people who lie to me
Trying to make me believe
The lies that they see, but all I want is to be free.

I’m crying now please make me see
You again so I can believe


Scheme ABXAB AAAABA BAAAABA AB
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11010111 111101101 110111111 1111111 01101 11111111 10101111 1011101 101111111 01101 1111 11101 1111111 1011111 101101011 010101111 1011101 0111111111111 11011111 10111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 629
Words 139
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 7, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

It’s about my religion. I’m so far removed at times from it.

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Written on January 05, 2023

Submitted by Camgina1 on January 05, 2023

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Cammeron Widick

Hi. I’m a male of average intelligence who just wants an outlet for his crazy thoughts. If you want to read please let me know what you think. I love feedback. more…

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