Analysis of Feelings of despair
Why do I hurt when I having been working on myself?
I wish I could put my feelings in a closed box on the shelf,
The weight of the pain is like the anchor of a ship,
Self sabotage with the drinks and the smoke is a temporary trip,
Just numb my pain and dry my tears,
Do something to save me from my fears,
Free my mind from this feeling of despair,
All these thoughts, I wish I did not care;
The damage is done, there is no going back,
I need a break, cut me some slack,
To close my eyes for a very long time,
Wishing for eternal peace is not a crime…
Scheme | AABBCDEEFFGG |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111111011011 111111100011101 0110111010101 110101001101001 11110111 110111111 1111110101 111111111 01011111101 11011111 1111101011 10101011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 553 |
Words | 127 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 12 |
Lines Amount | 12 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 421 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 116 |
About this poem
This is something I felt today and had to put it down in words as a way of releasing stress.
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Written on January 16, 2023
Submitted by mahnoorasif95 on January 16, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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