Analysis of Drowning
i watched as the,
ticking sound in my wrist matching with my heart,
cold wrapping me up, freezing me as i breathe.
how painfully beautiful it is to imagine your hands wrapped around mine, lying beside me,
oh to be your lifetime writer,
do nothing but whispering words in your ears,
hearing your laugh as music,
but the words of deadmen hanging inside my mind,
screaming, whining, crying and aching to get into my world.
the distance of the clouds couldn't hold the depth of my despair,
spreading across the sky,
far beyond the infinity this love won't let me die,
but how could it die?
how could I run?
how could this end?
I've wrote these words as my hands trembled,
but my thoughts?
feeling desperate for more than i ever could have!
can you feel the wave of my ocean filled with agony? without a savior to pull off?
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJKKKLMNOPQ |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110 10101110111 11011101111 110010011101011101110011 1111110 11011001011 1011110 10111100111 101010010110111 010101101011101 100101 10100100111111 11111 1111 1111 111111110 111 101011111011 1110111101110001010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 818 |
Words | 169 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 19 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 641 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 151 |
About this poem
when i was in love with someone i can never have, but i can do whatever i want in my words and my dreamlife
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Written on January 25, 2023
Submitted by hameeminnie2505 on January 28, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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