Analysis of BABY I MISS YOU



I miss you, baby, in so many WAYS
being without you this long I'm truly AMAZED

You and I had some real fun TIMES
so much fun that it's still on my MIND

The night we met happened by CHANCE
and the feelings we shared afterward with so much ROMANCE

You became my world my reason for LIVING
you were so good to me and I cherished what you were GIVING.

As time went on I wanted you everywhere that I WENT
I enjoyed your company and appreciated the time that we SPENT.

We became so close I couldn't understand WHY
to finally realize we were both lonely INSIDE

I'm glad we met in the way that we DID
I knew other guys wanted you but I won the BID

I'll never forget the feeling that I had when you were lying in my ARMS
holding you, kissing you and crazy about your CHARM.

You made me feel so good like I'd never felt BEFORE
I can honestly say that I miss you and I'd love to have some MORE.

but if you don't think so then that's the way it'll have to BE
I hope you think about what I've said and come spend some time with ME

I said all of that just to say THIS
You are needed and really MISSED

Being that I admire you and respect you so MUCH I have to be honest with you and tell you what's UP

I've taken your advice and found someone of my OWN
but I still miss the nights that you and I spent ALONE

and if you miss me in the way that I miss YOU
And if I can't see you ,baby a phone call will DO

Sometimes it takes someone else to help you see the LIGHT
the way it's shinning now it was shinning the same that NIGHT


Scheme XX XX AA BB CC XX DD XX EE FF XX X GG HH II
Poetic Form
Metre 1111001101 100111111001 10111111 111111111 01111011 00101110011101 10111110110 101111011011010 1111110110111 10111000010001111 10111110011 1100101011001 1111001111 1110110111101 1100101011111010011 1011010100111 1111111110101 11100111110111111 111111110110111 1111011110111111 111111111 11100101 10110110011111111101101111 110101011111 1111011101101 011110011111 0111111001111 011111111101 011111110111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,523
Words 334
Sentences 5
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Written on February 04, 2023

Submitted by thewingking1 on February 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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