Analysis of From Loraine

George Essex Evans 1863 (London) – 1909 (Toowoomba)



I have seen the plains lying baked and bare,
When drought and famine hold revel there,
And the cattle sink where the rotting shoals
Of the fish float dead in the waterholes.

I have seen the plains when the flood brings down
The leagues of its waters, sullen and brown,
When only the tops of the swaying trees
Mark the creek that wound thro’ the level leas,
And all is a sea to the straining eyes
Save some lonely hut on a distant rise.

I have seen the plains in the mad delight
Of the racing flames in their crimson flight,
When the whip of the wind will not stay or spare,
And woe to the rider who lingers there!

But, O! the plains when their beauty burst
On our wondering eyes as we crossed them first!
When the sun shone bright and a soft wind blew,
And the sky was clear with a fairy hue,
And afar, like an isle in a sea of mist,
Rose a mountain cap, as of amethyst.
And the big-horned cattle, knee-deep in grass,
Wheeled scattered legions to watch us pass,
As we drifted onwards from group to group;
And swift as a bolt came the wild hawk’s swoop,
When the brown quail whirled ’neath our horses’ feet
Or the bronzewing broke from his ground retreat
And the lazy bustard on laggard wing
Out of easy gunshot was loitering;
And for miles around us, at daylight’s close,
The little flock pigeons in coveys rose,
And the squadrons flew, with a gathering force,
Till an army darkened the watercourse.

Thus we crossed the plains to their utmost rim,
To the timbered belts round the mountains grim,
Chain upon chain, to the north and west,
Rose the swelling ridge and the purple crest,
And the gorges hid from the light of God
Where the foot of a white man had never trod.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110110101 110101101 0010110101 10111001 1110110111 0111101001 1100110101 1011110101 0110110101 1110110101 1110100101 1010101101 10110111111 0110101101 110111101 110100111111 1011100111 0011110101 00111100111 1010111100 0011101101 110101111 1110101111 0110110111 10111110101 101111101 0010101101 111011100 011011111 010110011 00101101001 11101001 111011111 101110101 101110101 1010100101 0010110111 10110111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,650
Words 318
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 18, 6
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 262
Words per stanza (avg) 63
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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George Essex Evans

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