Analysis of Amos 2: uplift and warning

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



Nazarites.
Remember those guys?
Never cut the hair.
Never into strong drink.
Living proof of
Unswaying followers of promise.
Parents and forebears
Witnessing
With smiles.
But you Jerusalem.
Backsliding vipers.
You stifle prophets’
Burdens, guidance.
You push bottles
At Nazarites.
You delight in contravening
ME, the one of many
Past rescues.
Neglectful.
Despicable.
Abusive.
Watch out tomorrow.
I cannot withold.


Scheme AABCDAAEAFAAAAACGAHHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 1 01011 10101 100111 1011 1100110 1001 100 11 110100 1010 11010 1010 1110 11 10101 101110 11 010 0100 010 1101 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 416
Words 76
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 335
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Written on January 22, 2023

Submitted by dougb.72572 on January 22, 2023

Modified by dougb.72572 on January 22, 2023

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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