Analysis of Bloody Corpse

Connor Parson 1997 (Florida)



My patience torn, my temper flame.
My anxious thorn inside my brain.
My laziness and spacious thoughts
Left alone in this void space like astronauts .
I float like sleep and dreams out there.
Catch me if you can, but I swear.
If you catch me in this evil habit.
You would quickly come unprepared in havoc.
The stars light burns up upon my face.
But do not be scared of this place.
As days come and pass.
Time and flesh will clash.
And than in a flash you won this race.
Think a game that kids might play.
Now that you are away.
Think of kids.
Yes think the kids.
Maybe than you will accept this fate.
Think of kids.
Yes the kids.
They now will play this dangerous game.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 11010111 11000101 1010111110 11110111 11111111 1111011010 1110101010 011110111 11111111 11101 10111 010011111 1011111 111101 111 1101 101110111 111 101 111111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 680
Words 150
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 517
Words per stanza (avg) 131
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Written on January 21, 2023

Submitted by 2016connorp on January 21, 2023

Modified on April 27, 2023

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