Analysis of Wait



He promised me to come  today
Spray the Lavender in the way  
The only fragrance he loves ,he says
throw some roses and Jasmin
Throw some marigolds too
Don't fold the curtains please
If he himself does so,
let him enjoy the scene
He promised me to come today
Spray the Lavender in the way
The only fragrance he loves he says
Throw some buds and flowers in the way
Some colorful balloon in the sky.
Fascinating tips  all arround then pray
Before the tears come into his eyes
Pls off the lights ,lit in his way .
He promised me to come today

Its too late he hasn't reached
He hasn't  reached  he hasn't  reached
Its too dark in front of me
Dear friend don't  wait
I have to go , I have to go
Take awaY the Lavender from the way
Let me go.       let me go

Today he promised to come
Throw away the roses from the way
And let me go.    let me go


Scheme aABxxxcxAABaxaxaA ddxxcac xac
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 10100001 010101111 1110010 11101 110101 110111 110101 11011101 10100001 010101111 111010001 110001001 10011111 010110111 11011011 11011101 1111101 11011101 1110111 1111 11111111 1010100101 111111 0111011 101010101 0111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 854
Words 184
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 17, 7, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 214
Words per stanza (avg) 61

About this poem

Just feelings

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Written on June 16, 2010

Submitted by Shanrukhi101 on January 18, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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