Analysis of The Model Prayer



Our Father up in Heaven,
Hallowed blessing be Your name;
Thank for all that is given,
I continue to proclaim.

For let Your Kingdom arrive,
Allowing Your will be done;
That here on earth to revive,
Like in Heaven has begun.

Give us this day daily bread,
And forgive us our debts;
As we forgive those who tread,
The ones who make idle threats.

Lead us not towards temptation,
Deliver us from evil;
Giving us the salvation,
For avoiding the devil.

Forgive others of their sin,
As Your Father forgave you;
So that He will cleanse within,
For you are faithful and true.

You have glory and power,
And a Kingdom forever;
Through each day and each hour,
A love that will not sever.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CACA DEDE AFAF GHGH IIII I
Poetic Form
Metre 10101010 1010111 1111110 1010101 1111001 0101111 1111101 1010101 1111101 0011101 1101111 0111101 11101010 0101110 1010010 1010010 0110111 1110011 1111101 1111001 1110010 0010010 1110110 0111110 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 719
Words 159
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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The Lord's Prayer Matthew 6:9-15

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Written on January 09, 2023

Submitted by sir_ricky on January 08, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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