Analysis of Wannabe



Bottom of the Hell with shallow stories
A Devil roam alone with no glories

Many years ago, a mistake was done intentionally
For which every would pay till ressurection with melancholy

Black and white would buried in the same grave to make grey
Akin to pray at a sin prey to the worst pay

And, misundersatndings happens to disguise the mise
Paragon of virtue masquerade to pretend wise

Till the light bend to obscure my faith
Still a darkness tend to secure a bait

This fight will end someday
The might I am still a wannabe


Scheme AA BB CC AX XX CB
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111010 0101011110 101010011101000 1110011111100 1011100011111 011110111011 011010101 10110011011 101110111 1010110101 11111 01111010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 538
Words 111
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

What happens when you do some mistakes intentionally? Are they count as mistakes? What If it wasn't you but someone else, does the feelings are same, someone perhabs you hate the most - also he is the one who is around your ears but not to your eyes?

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Submitted by akhtaraftab71 on December 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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I am just an average regular teenager just wanna share some of my free verse here hope you may like them. more…

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