Analysis of The six silent tears

Anecia Tashai Richards 2022 (Black River)



Last night before I went to bed
Thoughts of you filled my head
I have not cried this way in many years
Onto my pillow fell si silent tears

The first was for your smile that I missed
And your tender lips I long to kiss
The second was for your gentle face
And thoughts of your loving embrace

The third came as no surprise
As I thought of your beautiful eyes
The fourth came rolling down my face
Instead of my pillow, it should be you in its place

The fifth came for one reason alone
I felt my love for you wasn't fully shown
I really love you and miss you my dear And I just feel, the sixth silent year


Scheme AAXX XXBB CCBB DDX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 111111 1111110101 1011011101 011111111 011011111 010111101 01111001 0111101 111111001 01110111 0111101111011 011111001 11111110101 1101101111011101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 604
Words 127
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

This poem is about a girl who loves a boy but she just can't tell him.So she writes him a love poem telling him how she feels.

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Written on December 04, 2022

Submitted by aneciarichards9 on December 04, 2022

Modified on March 10, 2023

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