Analysis of Heaven above ocean clouds



I was walking at a beach,looking at the horizon.It captured my soul,heart,and mind.I could hear the ocean waves ,and thunderous clouds.It. awaken my spirit;too realized mortality.When it is my time,
For my soul, to depart my body.
Will my walk be peaceful ,as I walk above ,the ocean clouds.Whensoever i reach the gates of heaven.


Scheme ABC
Poetic Form Tercet 
Metre 11101011011011111010101001010111011111 111101110 1111101110101011101110
Characters 331
Words 66
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 86
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
Words per stanza (avg) 55

About this poem

Mortality of life, not very long in planet earth.

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Written on December 14, 2018

Submitted by on December 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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