Analysis of A Mentor's Inspiration



A Mentor's Inspiration
By: Shyane A. Roa

I stayed in your womb for nine months
You suffered difficulties every second
Your pregnancy stage was misery
But you were able to deliver me cautiously

Now you raise me as a healthy baby
Until I turned into a responsible lady
You never overlook to prompt me
The right things every now and everyday

To wake up early was your day-to-day routines
Just to organize my personal belongings
Whatever I do, Wherever I am
You have been with me just to ensure my safety

Mama, you’re the master of every task
Thank you for imparting whatever I ask
I always pleaded with God to repay your kindness
Providentially, He swiftly granted my prayers

So, when God gave me chance to a higher degree
I grabbed the ample opportunity to study
Because I knew It was your ambition
That someday I’ll be holding my degree in education

Mama, now I am standing with pride and honor
For reaping the fruits of your labor
I am now a licensed mentor
Willing to teach the children with love and fervor….


Scheme AX XXBB BBBX XXXB CCXX BBAA DDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 01010 11010 11011111 110100010010 110011100 1101010101100 1111101010 0111010010010 11010111 01110010101 111101111101 11101100010 101101011 111111101110 10101011001 1110101011 111011101110 11101011 111111101001 110100100110 0111111010 1111101010010 101111011010 110011110 1110101 101101011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,022
Words 190
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

A true to life story poem that made her life change because of patience and hardwork.

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Written on December 28, 2022

Submitted by shyane.roa on December 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shyane A. Roa

I grew up with a simple living, working hard just to finish my course and now I am currently teaching in our place as an Elementary educator. more…

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