Analysis of I’m not going



I’m standing still I’m not moving
You said stay still so I’m not going
I loved you one day so I’m not leaving
I’ll love you today please don’t leave me
It’s okay I’ll let you go
But just so you know
I’m standing here still not moving
You hold me still both are breathing
But I won’t go you’ll have to leave cause
I won’t leave


Scheme AAABCCAADE
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11011110 111111110 1111111110 111011111 111111 11111 11011110 11111110 111111111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 350
Words 67
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 248
Words per stanza (avg) 67

About this poem

I wrote this about my and my wife going through problems

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Written on January 05, 2023

Submitted by Camgina1 on January 05, 2023

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Cammeron Widick

Hi. I’m a male of average intelligence who just wants an outlet for his crazy thoughts. If you want to read please let me know what you think. I love feedback. more…

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