Analysis of evil me
let me bleed out the evil me
to even the score
to make you feel better
on the inside & in my head
so you could believe
that I don’t envy you
underneath the surface
of gray withered
uprooted landscape
going all out ...
alluding me to follow.
just like the crowded clouds in the sky
rejecting the claim in my story
so I chew on silence while I’m postponed
maybe I’ll be slain by you tonight
via poisoned kiss ...
so I turn to redemption
& to love god is escaping you
and to love you is death without god
and my naivety loves you more ...
all this because I stole a combined moment of us
hid it in these pages to tell myself that I was o.k.
that I shall tailor my skin to fit your needs
crucify my lips a symbol of redemption
that I won’t confess this love to anyone but you
I shall let the evil I bleed out on a crazy horse
galloping towards my cave,
ignoring the crowd cheering
in the nosebleed section along the way ...
captivated chain-less
immortalizing shadows
all innocence,
compared to you ...
everything is going all out
to cover me from the anguish
of the turning days
to bleed me out
Scheme | ABXXXCDXXEX XAXXX FCXBDGXFC XXXG XXXCEXXE |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110101 11001 111110 1001011 11101 111101 01010 1110 0101 1011 0101110 110101001 010010110 1111101101 101111101 10101 1111010 11110101 011111011 011111 1101110011011 11011011111111 11110111111 10110101010 111011111011 11101011110101 1000111 0100110 001100101 10011 010001 1100 0111 1011011 11011010 10101 1111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,180 |
Words | 244 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 11, 5, 9, 4, 8 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 170 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 47 |
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recognizing my evil intentions
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