Analysis of Results Achieved
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
Here it is.
The year 2023.
With many to accomplish,
Productive activities.
Known for decades to achieve.
Leaving others left to play,
Their successful unchanging blame game.
Convincingly done to do everyday.
And having more to believe,
What has been accomplished to achieve...
Had been the result to endeavor,
By those who sit, whine and complain...
About who does what to continue done to do,
Without to witness to see them sitting...
On their butts.
But,
Somehow...
And miraculously getting things done.
To know from those who skillfully complain,
An assistance to give it...
Seldom comes out of a moving mouth.
With a performance to witness lips,
Moving fast to judge and critique...
The very ones,
They benefit from with an eyebrow...
Yet,
Without a single finger to move or see lifted!
'So...
What is it to me you are saying?'
'Some pictures to paint them,
Can be abstract when presented.
And in need of explanation.
If in the year of 2023,
This is still a need...
To be understood to comprehend,
A connecting of dots to begin...
From where they start to end.
There is more,
Than just simple explanations needed...
To understand what is involved,
With having common sense as a tool to use!'
'I am not as old as you are.
Is it possible you can show me,
Where I can find it to buy?
I bet the expense of it is not as common,
As it had been when you were my age!'
'And to think...
How easy technology has made it these days,
For many to actually be proud...
Of being thoughtless and inconsiderate.
Yet to wonder why today's children,
Are undisciplined, rude, disrespectful.
Lawless, disobedient, lie and deceive.
And defend their entitlement,
To accuse the schools, teachers...
With a disgusting use of spewed free speech.
For being unqualified to cure and heal,
The minds of those socially psychopaths.
Displaying lessons taught to teach them,
Ignorance and stupidity to imitate...
Is an envious position many wish they had!'
'And...?
What point are you attempting to make?'
'Robots are not being programmed,
To be that dumb.
But will be capable to identify,
The ones who are!
With an ease to believe it done!'
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 01 1101010 0100100 1101101 1010111 101001011 0100111101 0101101 111010101 110011010 11111001 011111010111 0111011110 111 1 1 0010001011 1111110001 1010111 101110101 100101101 10111001 0101 11001111 1 0101010111110 1 111111110 110111 11011010 0011010 10011 11101 1101101 001011101 111111 111 111001010 1011101 11010110111 11111111 111001111 1111111 110011111110 111111011 011 110010011111 110110011 1101001 111010110 101001010 1001001001 00110100 1010110 1001011111 1100101101 011110010 010101111 10000100110 1110001010111 0 111101011 111101 1111 1111001010 0111 11110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,127 |
Words | 444 |
Sentences | 46 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 27, 2, 12, 5, 15, 2, 5 |
Lines Amount | 68 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 232 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 52 |
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Written on January 01, 2023
Submitted by lpahtillah on January 01, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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