Analysis of Sinners Judgement Shame
Another trial comes.
Based on their rule of thumb, to persecute the one that stands alone.
Faced with fear of what others may think,
She decided not to speak,
So I tried to speak for her.
But when I did, they pointed their fingers at us in shame, then they proclaimed,
He IS THE REASON SHE HAS CONCIEVED!
I had not part in this child to be for I am willing to take the place of He.
Then she fell and cried, as I lightly touched her head and said, “its ok. Please don't cry. I will help you through this time.”
then she arose and spoke!
But when she did, and tried to explain,
They didn't listen to what we had to say.
Instead, they cast their sinner judgement shame upon the one that stands alone.
In darkness and in pain.
They judged for what they though it was right,
Not knowing he took her unwillingly that night.
So she left this terrible place,
Only to go where fate would follow.
Scheme | ABCDEFFGHIJKBJLLMN |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 010101 111111110011101 111111011 110111 1111110 111111011011011101 11010111 11110111111110110111 111011110101011111111111111 110101 111101101 11010111111 011111010101011101 010001 111111111 110110010011 11111001 101111110 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 893 |
Words | 189 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 18 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 38 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 684 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 172 |
About this poem
This is a poem I wrote long ago about the emotional trama of abortion on a a rape victim carries.
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Written on January 01, 2000
Submitted by Jedgetsit on December 28, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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