Analysis of The Eight in Seventy Two



Ploddingly it took the form
Of some dispassionate melody
Our wailing voices at crescendo
For our undying we mourn

With care they traipsed the deck
A mass of notions in mind
Did ten artlessly disappear
or were held by the Atlantic's inside?

Still we stood and tried to inform
Searchers of our malady
That we living men hitherto
can presently not be seen

Still we stand on Mary's deck
To us the world is blind
As they neither see nor hear
our gestures nor our cries

Not all can be explained
Not all can we fathom
Some presences can't be felt
like the eight in seventy two


Scheme ABXX CDXX ABEX CDXX XXXE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101 110100100 1010101010 11001011 111101 0111001 11101 1011001001 11101101 10110100 1110111 1100111 1111101 110111 1110111 10101101 111101 111110 1100111 10101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 573
Words 112
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on December 27, 2022

Submitted by eseiwiosaiga123 on December 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ese Oscar

Eseiwi Oscar Osaiga was born in Port Harcourt, Rivers State, Nigeria. He attended Tago Education Centre and Jomaro International School, Delta state for his primary and early secondary Education. He completed his high school education at Bethel Fath Group of Schools, Benin City, Edo State. He presently studies accounting at the University of Benin. Oscar has written several poems including “Unending Leave", “Dark Armed Dragon", “Nature and Future" etc more…

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