Analysis of They lied to me!



They said that I should go to school
And there I would learn and be wise
But I soon found out that the education system
Was only 10% education and 90% system
A place where little girls and boys
Are brainwashed into blindly following the system

They said that if I get good grades
I could be anything I wanted when I grow up
Nobody told me that anything had boundaries
Boundaries of tribe, color and economic worth
That anything included nothing
And that the sky was too low for a limit

They said I should go to church and be good
So that all I prayed for, the good God would give
Nobody told me the church is a business
And I must pay for the privilege
That God helped those who have already helped themselves
And goddamned to those unlucky poor souls

They said that I shouldn't worry about my loneliness
That there was someone out there for everyone
Nobody told me it might take forever to find her
That she might have been born at a different time than me
That she might be in China while I am stuck in Africa
That she might be a he, and I might not have the feel

Nobody told me!


Scheme XXAAXA XXXXXX XXBXXX BXXCXX C
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 01111011 111111001010 110010010 01110101 110110100010 11111111 111101101111 1111101100 100111000101 11001010 01011111010 1111111011 11111101111 111011010 01111010 111111010101 011101011 11111010011100 111111110 111111010110 11111110100111 111101011110100 1111010111101 111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,086
Words 216
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 173
Words per stanza (avg) 42

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Submitted by GIDRAF on December 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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