Analysis of Words Unspoken



Words unspoken.
But your eyes understood.
No denying the emotions.
Not even if we could.
2 hearts. 1 connection.
How could this be?
You’re with her, you can’t love me!
So why do we torture?
Craving what we can’t have.
This is not the plan.
We can’t choose our path.
So I ease away, with pain in my heart
How did we get like this? How did this start?
The thought of you, sends a wave down my spine
5 days & Eight hours is never enough time.
See that’s the thing. I felt this before.
Repetitive emotions, my heart can’t endure
Do I follow my heart
Or do I follow my mind?
Because it seems to be a waste of our time
This high is temporary
And we both know
Will our love be a memory
Or will it grow?
Your lips. Your laugh. Your eyes & touch.
I hold near to my heart
I treasure you, so much
I can’t help but to think, does your heart feel the same?
Is this all in my head? Or, are we truly sync?
Questions that will go unheard
But my heart will still feel
You’re my person. You’re so ideal.
This is what scares me,
The bond that we share
I just need you to say it
Please, just show me you care!
I’m patient with you
because your heart is so weak
I want to cater to you
And listen when you speak
Your name lives in my body,
I feel connected to you
But I’m silently broken
Because you don’t feel it too.
Words. Unspoken.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1010 11101 10100010 110111 1010 1111 1101111 111110 101111 11101 111101 1110111011 1111111111 0111101111 1110110011 110111101 010001011101 111011 1111011 011111011101 111100 0111 110110100 1111 1111111 111111 110111 111111111101 111011111101 1011101 111111 11101101 11111 01111 1111111 111111 11011 0111111 1111011 010111 1110110 1101011 1110010 0111111 1010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,346
Words 295
Sentences 31
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 45
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 992
Words per stanza (avg) 267
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Written on September 17, 2022

Submitted by Hesmyperson on December 28, 2022

Modified by Hesmyperson on December 28, 2022

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