Analysis of FIGHTING



The sun fighting for its identity
Hold still by the proud shine
But the cloud showings it's impact
Found a light escaping through the cloud
A ray of hope emerges in the hustle
But more cloud came to hide it's identity
A black blanket of cloud covers him
Poor him made himself calm
Golden emerald shine trapped in the clouds
Time passes gathering his all energy
Now he fights back with shine of colours
Rose above this is time of pride
The clouds fears by the shinniest light
Made a way away from him
To again shine in the dark
Lights always made a way
At the end he won
Dark made his place beneath the sun
Sun proves the identity of dark
A sun above all proves it's identity
A light always stood against dark


Scheme ABCDEAFGHAHIJFKLMMKAK
Poetic Form
Metre 0110110100 111011 10110101 101010101 01110100010 11111110100 011011101 111011 101011001 11010011100 11111111 10111111 0111011 1010111 1011001 11101 10111 11110101 110010011 01011110100 0111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 709
Words 137
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 570
Words per stanza (avg) 136
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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