Analysis of through the foggy window
I live in a prison with bars of Time
where I spend my days waiting
by others, so many, who bequeath without leaving
behind you, the marks of a breath
I live in a prison full of people
silent people, mouth to murmur
prayers, prayers, always begging
for another day, without dreaming ahead
They don't know that sometimes souls break
not at the end, when they wait for the end
but in the middle, right before they wake up?
So they lie on top of everything they didn't have!
The nothingness of the reason why they existed
They leave... as if they were never here!
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1100101111 1111110 1101101010110 01101101 1100101110 10101110 11110 10101011001 11110111 1101111101 10010101111 111111101101 0100101011010 111110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 562 |
Words | 110 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 3, 3 |
Lines Amount | 14 |
Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 110 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
About this poem
observing the lives of people who behave like ants busy with their day-to-day jobs waiting impatiently to be old with the right to the pension for which they fought so hard...
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Written on October 05, 2022
Submitted by carlosj.80683 on December 21, 2022
Modified on March 31, 2023
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