Analysis of Submissive Rains



The rain
Washes away
What she once was
And creates
A new slate
For whom she
Truly is...
Submitting to the floodwaters
Washing over her
Just as her emotions
Free her from the captivity
Of hiding herself from
That which some say is taboo
That she says is the sweetest sins.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJFKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 01 1001 1111 001 011 111 101 0101010 10100 110010 10100100 110011 1111101 11110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 271
Words 52
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 217
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Written on October 17, 2022

Submitted by flisburns on December 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Marie Flis

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