Analysis of As I Walked Out One Evening



As I walked out one evening
Walking down Bristol Street
The crowds upon the pavement
Were fields of harvest wheat

And down by the brimming river
I heard a lover sing
Under an arch of the railway
“Love has no ending”

"I'll love you, dear, I'll love you
Till China and Africa meet
And the river jumps over the mountain
And the salmons sing in the street

“I'll love you till the ocean
Is folded and hung up to dry,
And the seven stars go squawking
Like geese about the sky”

“The years shall run like rabbits
For in my arms I hold
The flower of the ages
And the first love of the world”

But all the clocks in the city
Began to whirr and chime
"O let not Time deceive you
You cannot conquer time"

In the burrows of the nightmare
Where justice naked is
Time watches from the shadow
And coughs when you would kiss

In headaches and in worry
Vaguely life leaks away
And time will have his fancy
Tomorrow or today

Into many a green valley
Drifts the appalling snow
Time breaks the threaded dances
And the diver's brilliant bow.

"O plunge your hands in water
Plunge them in up to the wrist
Stare, stare in the basin
And wonder what you've missed"

The glacier knocks in the cupboard
The desert sighs in the bed
And the crack in the tea-cup opens
A lane to the land of the dead

Where the beggars raffle the banknotes
And the giant is enchanting to Jack
And the Lily-white boy is a roarer
And Jill goes down on her back

"O look, look in the mirror
O look in your distress
Life remains a blessing
Although you cannot bless”

“O stand, stand at the window
As the tears scald and start
You shall love your crooked neighbor
With your crooked heart"

It was late, late in the evening
The lovers they were gone
The clocks had ceased their chiming
And the deep river ran on


Scheme ABXB CADA EBFB FGAG XXHX IJEJ XXKX IDID IKHX CLFL XMXM XNCN COAO KPCP AXAX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (73%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1111110 101101 0101010 011101 01101010 110101 1011101 11110 1111111 11001001 0010110010 00101001 1111010 11001111 00101110 110101 0111110 101111 0101010 0011101 11010010 011101 1111011 110101 0010101 110101 110101 011111 010010 101101 0111110 01101 01100110 100101 1101010 0010101 1111010 1101101 110010 010111 01010010 0101001 001001110 01101101 10101001 0010101011 001011101 0111101 1110010 110101 101010 11101 1111010 101101 11111010 11101 11110010 010101 011111 0011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,799
Words 371
Sentences 2
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 60
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by muziiiii on December 10, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

1:53 min read
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