Analysis of Hello Tired



You visit me each night
either covering me with a fog
upon the mind
or stirring up thoughts
racing for one last run around the field

I sit with you upon the couch
fighting each other
you covering me
me pushing you away

dreams await, as a cast upon the edge of the backstage
for their que

I write anddddllld;;;d;;g;g;ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg


Scheme XAXXX XXXX XX A
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 101001101 0101 11011 1011110101 11110101 10110 11001 110101 10110101011011 111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 395
Words 70
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

just before sleep , with a bit of comedic style.

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Written on December 08, 2022

Submitted by mikes1648 on December 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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