Analysis of Ramblings of a Madman

Ryan Mark Robinson 1977 (Horicon)



I am walking…Never stopping…
Never wondering…Always thinking…
Not afraid…Just confused…
Always cautious…I’m not blinking…
I am lonely, always solemn,
Never together, I am not alone…
Never loved for, never cared for –
Endless shivering…hearts of stone…
Did she love me? Does she hate me?
I’ll always love her…Does she know?
I am here…Am I there?
Not my friend, I am my foe!
I did love her, but I killed her;
She was blind…I could not see…
Always fearing, never caring –
I don’t know me…INSANITY!!!
What is “why”?  This is because –
What is “truth”?  I never lie!!!
She’s not alive, I did kill her…
Not one tear for…I MUST DIE!!!


Scheme AABACDEDFGHGIFAFJKIK
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101010 10100110 101101 1101110 1110110 1001011101 10111011 10100111 11111111 1110111 111111 1111111 11101110 1111111 1101010 11110100 1111101 1111101 11011110 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 695
Words 119
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 461
Words per stanza (avg) 112

About this poem

...a poem resembling my childhood, when I was involved with gangs, drugs, violence.... I was a good person who did bad things & lost a chance at love because of it. At 1st I blamed her, then came to the realization it was who I was as a person that drove us apart. Now a grown man with a child & wife, I truly see the errors of my old ways....the old me, whom now is "dead" so to speak.

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Written on July 14, 1995

Submitted by Srsmkalt on November 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ryan Mark Robinson

Happily married, Christian man...loving father of 3 young men. My family is my life...the Lord is my everything...... more…

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