Analysis of Queer Caution



I’m warned about you
And how I’m never to relinquish my heart
To you again.

Worries of distress and prayer
Cloud the eerie skies
And my fragile wits.

Don’t let the girl with
The hazelnut hair and
Chocolate chip eyes
Touch you again.

But my core, with melancholy, will
Miss your feminine lips
And the curve of your small neck.

Arms, hands, hips, sins
You hold my waist
You clasp my hand
You grasp my queer heart.


Scheme XAB XCX XXCB XXX XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 01110101011 1101 1010101 10101 01101 11011 01010 1011 1101 11111001 111001 0011111 1111 1111 1111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 422
Words 85
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 3, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This poem is about a girl I was on and off with for a while, even though she betrayed me many times, and how everyone I know has always warned me not to give in to her.

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Written on October 27, 2022

Submitted by summerolmos456 on November 10, 2022

Modified on March 21, 2023

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