Analysis of If I was!



If I was the ocean, I would've lost my salinity to quench your thirst.

If I was the dust, I would never have crossed u for you are prone to allergies.

If I was the desert, I would've turned the Mirage of water into reality.

If I was the bed, I would've become the cosiest place.

If I was the petrol, I would've never run out cause you are a traveler of land.

If I was the cupid, I would've had hit my arrow with the most purest girl.

As in, I being me, I would go to any extent to see u smile.

Engulfing your miseries, polarize your life with colors and light and capture in u beatified maze.

And every process goes on like this...

The purity of these alleles are nothing more than u.

Even the sun and moon would bow before u

The clarity u hold in your eyes

Just justifies all kind of tiers

Music to a succumb life

Forming the base of a pillar

U pile up every puzzled flight

Love originates from mark

And ends in the stream

Joyous victory is all what it seems!


Scheme X X X X X X X X X A A X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101101101001111 11101111011111111100 11101011010011100110 1110111001011 1110101101011111010011 11101011011110101101 101101111110011111 0101100101111001010010101 010011111 010011010110111 10010111011 010011011 1101111 1010011 10011010 111100101 101011 01001 1010011111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 991
Words 229
Sentences 12
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 10

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It's all because of him.

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Written on November 25, 2022

Submitted by ritikasahu902 on November 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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