Analysis of Hallelujah

Brooke Rigsby 1992 (South Carolina)



Beauty
Divinity
All that made you
All you were
I couldn’t attempt to
Can time change the timeless
You stand prophetic proof
Yet I raise you and you quell me
Turned your head but saw past me
Is this cold crass crucifixion
Part of your proverbial plot
To rid me from your side
Do I scare you
Because I challenge you?
Preach not to me of love
Preach not of sin
Thou God who hast betrayed his own kin
And if not with you
Against you I scream
Hallelujah to the broken king


Scheme AABCBDEAAFGHBBIJJBKL
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 10 0100 1111 110 11011 111010 110101 11110111 1111111 1111010 11101001 111111 1111 011101 111111 1111 111101111 01111 01111 01010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 474
Words 98
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 373
Words per stanza (avg) 93

About this poem

A poem from Lucifer’s perspective, on his fall from grace.

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Written on November 03, 2022

Submitted by brooke_r on November 03, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Brooke Rigsby

My names Brooke and I’m 30, from Tennessee. Writing poetry is my passion, but in my free time I also like to draw and do needlework! more…

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