Analysis of COARSENESS OF WELLNESS



IT IS BETTER AND BEST FOR US
TO KNOW THAT
WE NEED LIFE TO ENJOY THINGS
IT IS DEVASTATING TO BELIEVE THAT
WE NEED THINGS TO ENJOY LIFE

THE HEALTHY PHYSICIANS ARE BECOMING SICK
INCESSANT STRIKES WEAKEN THE CAPACITIES
OF THE TAKEN HIPPOCRATIC OATH
AND NARROWED THE
SPREADING POWER OF LICENSES

IF WARNERS AGAINST DISEASES,
ARE ABUSERS OF ITS RISK FACTORS,
HEALTH COMMUNICATION
HAS LOST ITS SENSE ORGANS

ROAD TRAFFIC CRIES OUT FOR HELP
NO ONE ANSWERED, AND IT GOT UPSET
BREAKING PEOPLE’S BONES
SAPPING OUT INNOCENTS’ SPINAL CORDS
RENDERING THE LIMBED LIMBLESS
THROUGH AUTOMOBILE COLLISIONS,
BECAUSE NO VOICE WAS AMPLIFIED IN HER FAVOUR

DRUGS!
CONCEIVED TO RESTORE PHYSIOLOGY
AIMED AT DESTROYING PATHOLOGY
ALONG WITH ITS PLACENTA, SIDE EFFECTS
HAD SPOKEN AGAINST DUBIOUS
PRODUCTION AND TRANSACTIONS
HAD BEEN DISTRESSED, MAJORLY
BECAUSE OF UNAFFORDABILITY
IS NOW DESTROYING PHYSIOLOGIES
AND GREASING PATHOLOGIES

SOME SOILS ARE LOAMY
SOME ARE SANDY,
WHILE OTHERS ARE CLAY
LOAMY SOIL IS IMPOVERISHED
POOR SANITATION TOOK IT FOR GRANTED
AND ITS NUTRIENTS BECAME CANCEROUS
THROUGH IMPROPER SEWAGE DISPOSAL
METASTASIZING TO AFFECTING AGRICULTURE

WHAT OF OUR FINGERS?
PARTICULARLY THE FINGER BEDS
CAPABLE OF HARBOURING SUBSTANCES SUCH AS
SKIN SPECKS OF DIRTS,
FROM ITCHES BY SCRATCHES
WASTE HANDPICKING, AMONGST OTHERS
MOST OF THE TIME FORGET
ITS TIME OF CALL-TO-ORDER
PREDISPOSING TO INFECTIOUS AND
NON-COMMUNICABLE DISEASES

HYGIENE MUST TAKE HER WEAPON
ACCOMPANIED BY A BALANCED DIET
TO ANTAGONIZE ANTAGONISTS
OF HEALTH & WELL-BEING
BECAUSE IT IS A GOAL
A SUSTAINABLE GOAL
A GOOD HEALTH IS GOOD
AND WELL-BEING IS GOODLY WELL


Scheme ABXBX XCXXX DEFG XHXXAGI XJJXAGKBAC JJKXXAKI EXXADEHIXD FXXXKKXK
Poetic Form
Metre 11100111 111 1111011 111001011 1111011 01001010101 01011000100 101000101 0100 10101100 11001010 101011110 10010 111110 1101111 111001101 10101 101100101 1000110 1100010 0111110001 1 011010100 110100100 0111010101 11001100 0100010 11011 0111 110101 0100100 11110 1110 11011 1011010 101011110 0110001100 101010010 11010100 111010 10000101 1001110011 1111 110110 110110 110101 1111110 01010100 101000010 111010 0100101010 10100100 11110 011101 001001 01111 01101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,636
Words 275
Sentences 3
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 7, 10, 8, 10, 8
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 168
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

The coarseness of Wellness was written on the 1st of October 2022 (Nigeria's Independence day), to remind me and the citizens of the challenges the country's healthcare is facing.

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Written on October 01, 2022

Submitted by reubencelestine on November 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Celestine, S. Reuben

I am a Global Citizen from Lagos, Nigeria, passionate about making music that Edifies, Writings that Enlighten, Teachings that Transform, and Productions that Inspire. I am a rising youth diplomat and education advocate; passionate about youthful education; sustainable decent works, good health and wellbeing, transformative and quality education, and peaceful interconnectedness. Over the years, I had participated in Conferences, Webinars, Seminar and Workshop with International and Global citizens from different nations (Malaysia, Colombia, Vietnam, Pakistan, Peru, Philippines, India, and Nigeria just to mention a few) as a Volunteer speaker, Resourceful speaker, Host, and Organizer. In 2021, I was the first Nigerian to be featured in the U.K-based E-Learning platform “Futurelearn” and the First Author from my University (The Federal University of Technology, Akure, Nigeria) to publish an article in the Journal of the International Youth Neuroscience Association in the United States. I had my Bachelor’s Degree in Human Anatomy and would love to further my studies in the field of Neuroscience extensively. I graduated from the University with over 150 certificates of learning/personal development from different online campuses of different nations as well such as Global Citizenship Education, Futurelearn, World Health Organization, and Non-Governmental Organizations to mention a few. I am still grooming for greatness and there is no sign of slowing down. more…

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