Analysis of Blue Hole
I saw if from afar,
It was a beautiful shiny star.
The one I thought, I could reach,
so I decided to walk towards it.
It was easy going there,
No worries, no hardships.
It's the place where my heart raced,
My eyes were dilated.
Kinda mesmerizing view.
Kinda temporizing hue.
And once I realised, I was near,
I lost all the fear, so I approached it clear.
I run and I run until I reach by the shore,
I saw the star sinking into the deep blue hole.
I was no more incisive,
So I jumped indecisive .
I went deeper.
and deeper into the sea,
where the secrets of sea reside,
a place for no man to be alive,
But I couldn't resist my love for the sinking star.
I continue to dive deep and hard.
I saw a beautiful arch,
A blue and bold.
The kind that attracts everyone,
whoever it gets ahold.
I was about to cross the diving limit.
when my warning light began to blink.
I realise I am too deep, so away from the ground.
I should reach up before I am lost in this town.
I feel entering a trance.
I feel like a dance.
I can see the star calling me in.
I can't stop myself from sinking.
i tryna call for help, I lost my direction,
I no more know my entrance or my departure.
Everything was dark surrounding me,
yet I was looking at the star continuously.
Its the moment before I'll be gone.
should I let myself sink in?
should I drown?
My dazed self, couldn't be self- helped.
As the love i see in this blue hole,
I feel enslaved.
I would rather let myself sink,
with this happiness, I'll leave.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111101 110100101 0111111 111011011 1110101 110110 1011111 110010 101001 101001 0111111 11101110111 110110111101 110110010111 1111010 111010 1110 0100101 10101101 011111101 1110011110101 101011101 1101001 0101 0110110 0101101 11011101010 111010111 111111101101 111101111011 1110001 11101 111011010 1111110 11111111010 111111011010 10110101 1111010101000 101001111 111110 111 11110111 101110111 1101 1110111 1110011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,507 |
Words | 358 |
Sentences | 30 |
Stanzas | 21 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 46 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 54 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
About this poem
This poem is about one sided lover longing for the love of his life, trying to reach her but unfortunately was never successful.
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Written on November 03, 2022
Submitted by msminhaaj on November 02, 2022
Modified on March 30, 2023
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