Analysis of Be normal and sain?
They say it's the age
But what if I stop eating,
Start smoking, rib my leg or my hand
What if I slowly or fast
Just exhaust myself?
What if I don't make it till tomorrow,
Till that date?
Dreams can't hold you
Neither the demons in your head
What if I quit all this pressure
And try to live freely and happy life
Is that normal or the guilt will make me die And why not change the world
As every generation says
With this pressure, how is the answer
there.
And if this phase is a life
Or the end?
For you will mean something
That others never heard
They say no goals, no potential
But I wasted them all for one grade
Or for a nice compliment
Lose control, they never care.
No just a little phase, they'll say
But if you keep the straight A's
Why would you ever need help?
No, it's just a phase or a button in your head.
| Scheme | XAXXX XXXB CDXXCE DXAX XXXE XXXB |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11101 1111110 110111111 1111011 1011 111111101 111 1111 10010011 11111110 0111100101 11101011111011101 11000101 111011010 1 0111101 101 111110 110101 11111010 111011111 1101100 1011101 11010111 1111011 1111011 111011010011 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 848 |
| Words | 190 |
| Sentences | 7 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 5, 4, 6, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 27 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 105 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
About this poem
This poem is coming deep from teenager thoughts and real situations . Our whole lives depend on how well someone will do as a teen, noone realizes the strangles of this age when you have this pressure from a whole universe. This is for every teen who just couldnt be enough for theirselves .
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Written on October 09, 2022
Submitted by Melenelenia on November 12, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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